Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 




Oh please keep me here
boundless  darkness; my comfort.
Hold me tightly now.
Release me from this prison,
Prison of light and colour.
©2009-2010 *Sarah-Alice
:iconsarah-alice:

Author's Comments

It is a tanka, similar to a haiku, but the number of lines and the number of syllables are different. It goes:

5
7
5
7
5

This was another piece that came from my writers craft class (I need to finish something new...>.> )

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconnej2d:
short and to the point :) i like it.

somewhat morbid and twisted view on imprisonment and the idea of freedom. Which really makes it that much more appealing ;)

great work keep it up!
:iconsarah-alice:
the topic was a blind man seeing for the first time, but i guess it's a multi level thing... ^-^ that's the great thing about literature, it can be seen so many different ways. thank you.

--
Life is a game, we're coming up with the rules as we go along. Take my hand and we'll figure it out together.

Details

May 30, 2009
257 bytes
23.3 KB
150×150

Statistics

2
1 [who?]
8 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map